HEYYYYYY this is my writers tool box for this week hope you enjoy an read it is very long.
Unphased by shadows under her board, Lily Kenny had one thing on her mind—winning.
The thing is, we want TEN bits of detail today. That’s names, numbers, or places in your writing.
Happy days.
Hi my name is Lily Kenny. I love surfing but because I’m in under 10s I have to be attached to a boat. I just need to try and not fall off. last year I was so close to getting 1st place but instead I got 2nd but that’s ok. I mean at least I was on the leader board. but this year I have been training everyday and I think I’m ready but this year is different because you don’t get a trophy to keep you only get it for a year until the next game. but then if you take great care about it you get $50k
Surfing is my passion I love it so much I do it every day I can also do it without the boat. But for the comp’s I need to do it with a boat other wise i will be eliminated. I don’t want that because I’ve been so close to winning in all of the years I’ve been surfing.
Today I did not go to school because I needed to train hard because the comp is tonight and I can not fail and I need to win this so my family can be super proud. Because most of the time my little sister gets all of the attention and I want some for once in a while. so that’s why I need to do this. And I want to do it for my family and so we can go on Holiday together because normally the whole family cant come because we don’t have enough money but if I win this and look after the trophy I can do it.
So I’ve been training so much today and I think I can do this. So tonight is the night I get in my bathing suit and off the the beach. and I was a little bit late so I didn’t have any time to practice but that ok I’ve been doing that all day long. and then I heard ” SURFERS TO THE STARTING LINE PLEASE” . So I had to get my board take a quick dip before getting on my boardmand then ” 3…2…1… GOOOOO off I went going super fast catching all the waves and also in first place. a couple minutes when past someone passed me but that ok we still had a little bit to go. Off I went zomming past the boy stright away and what do I see up ahead the finsh line so I just over all of these mad crazy waves and boom MADE IT FIRST PLACE. I was head over heals and so happy I ran over to my family and they were so happy for me and I was too we all ran over to the trophy and claimed the prize went home went out for dinner to celebrate and had the best night of our lives.
And I loved it so much I got the attention and got the trophy and was so happy I even got to go out and buy a shelf too put the trophy.
THE END.