Tag: slayyy

In it to win it.

HEYYYYYY this is my writers tool box for this week hope you enjoy an read it is very long.

Unphased by shadows under her board, Lily Kenny had one thing on her mind—winning.

The thing is, we want TEN bits of detail today.  That’s names, numbers, or places in your writing.

Happy days.

 

Hi my name is Lily Kenny. I love surfing but because I’m in under 10s I have to be attached to a boat. I just need to try and not fall off. last year I was so close to getting 1st place but instead I got 2nd but that’s ok. I mean at least I was on the leader board. but this year I have been training everyday and I think I’m ready but this year is different because you don’t get a trophy to keep you only get it for a year until the next game. but then if you take great care about it you get $50k

Surfing is my passion I love it so much I do it every day I can also do it without the boat. But for the comp’s I need to do it with a boat other wise i will be eliminated. I don’t want that because I’ve been so close to winning in all of the years I’ve been surfing.

Today I did not go to school because I needed to train hard because the comp is tonight and I can not fail and I need to win this so my family can be super proud. Because most of the time my little sister gets all of the attention and I want some for once in a while. so that’s why I need to do this. And I want to do it for my family and so we can go on Holiday together because normally the whole family cant come because we don’t have enough money but if I win this and look after the trophy I can do it.

So I’ve been training so much today and I think I can do this. So tonight is the night I get in my bathing suit and off the the beach. and I was a little bit late so I didn’t have any time to practice but that ok I’ve been doing that all day long. and then I heard ” SURFERS TO THE STARTING LINE PLEASE” . So I had to get my board take a quick dip before getting on my boardmand then ” 3…2…1… GOOOOO off I went going super fast catching all the waves and also in first place. a couple minutes when past someone passed me but that ok we still had a little bit to go. Off I went zomming past the boy stright away and what do I see up ahead the finsh line so I just over all of these mad crazy waves and boom MADE IT FIRST PLACE. I was head over heals and so happy I ran over to my family and they were so happy for me and I was too we all ran over to the trophy and claimed the prize went home went out for dinner to celebrate and had the best night of our lives.

And I loved it so much I got the attention and got the trophy and was so happy I even got to go out and buy a shelf too put the trophy.

THE END.

set the sence

this is this weeks  writing challenge.

and this was the challenge for today.

Make us feel like we’re there.

Within a sentence, NO word can be repeated.  Oh, and you MUST use the word ‘flipper’ in your THIRD sentence.

Take it away

and this is the story I did.

Hi my name is Noah and I’m a Astronaut.I love being an astronaut because you get to explore places you have never been.And today I went to the moon it was so cool but I had to bring my lucky flipper with me obi.But today wasn’t like any normal day it was dark and gloomy and looks like emo people could be around.But we kept pushing through and soon enough I got over it.But then the was these noises coming from the corner of the dark side of the moon but then we clicked we landed on the dark side of the moon because we knew that is was so dark and ugly and really messy. I hated the dark side of the moon ever since I was a little kid because they always made it scary in the books I used to read when I was younger. But then we had to make our way over to the right side of the moon which took ages because of course there is no gravity so we were hopping everywhere and that took so long. my short hair was stuck up and everyone was floating and having fun but not me I’m like the dad of the group because no one listens to one another they all just listen to me because im practically the boss when we are up in space.

Jump on a board.

This is my writers toolbox from today…..

this was today challenge.

There’s a reason Emma Austin clutched her surfboard tightly.  She used it to surf the waves—and the skies.

Tell us in exactly TEN sentences what you did when you got hold of Emma’s surfboard.

Sky’s the limit.

 

 

Hi my name is Emelia. I love going to the beach and it’s so fun but one day when i went to the beach i saw something washed up in the sand. i went over to the thing and there it was a surf board. so I grabbed the surf board and went into the water and then as soon as i was about to catch a wave it made me go up up up into the sky and i did not know what was happening.Untill it started to speak “when would you like me too but u down emma?”

it said. but then i clicked this isnt any odanary surf board its a magic surf board. I said “im not emma” then the surf board said “who are you then”. ” im Emelia” i said “ok Emelia where is Emma” “I’m not so sure i found this surf board washed up on the beach”. But if u want i can put u back and wait for emma to come a take you. “WAIT” screamed the surf board let me take you somewhere where i I haven’t haven’t taken anyone. “ok?” “i said where would you like to take me??” you know what never mind you ask too too many questions BYE then off the surf board flew away probably to find Emma.