DYLAN’S DISCOVERY by charlee

this is one of my daily challenges for this week I had to do upto 150  words but it was really easy hope you enjoy I guess.

Hi my name is Dylan and I want to become a scientist. I love everything to do with math, science,etc but most of all I love making things to help out with the world. but today my experiment went wrong. I started off really good I was creating a world cleaning robot. but then I realized that something went wrong because I but the wrong wire in the robots arms. but then I just turned on and I started to scream. then I opened my door and went outside. it was picking up all of the rubbish so I thought it was going good UNTIL. It chucked all of the rubbish in side of the ocean so I jumped on it like a possum and ripped out the wires then it finally shut off but I was really sad. because I thought that robot was gonna help the world but of well I guess not.

181 words.

Message in a bottle.

Hi everyone this is my fav story from this week its pretty long but I think it alright.

 

Hi my name is Elanor. I love walking my dog at the beach and he loves it too. My dogs name is Bear and he is so wild but I love him very much. So today to celebrate national dog day I decided to take him out for a walk along the beach. But we had to get all ready first so I woke up got dressed and went to wake bear up. When I told him we were gonna go for a walk he started jumping up everywhere and making a huge mess. But oh well that’s what dogs do right?? anyways he was so excited but to be fair so was I. so I put on my shoes and put bear in the car put his cute doggy seat belt on and off we went. we rolled all the windows down to get that fresh air. He was loving it so much and so was I. As soon as we got to the beach I took his seat belt of and he jumped out of the window. it was so funny but then he went running right into the water and was trying to chase something but I didn’t think anything of it because that’s what he normally does. but then he came up to me with something I his mouth that looked kind of like a glass bottle. he came up to me and dropped it IT WAS A MESSAGE INA BOTTLE. I’ve always wanted to receive one of these but when I opened up the letter you would not believe what it said.

” Dear whoever opens up this letter. There are aliens on earth but they look just like us. so don’t get mixed up I thought I made my first friend but it turns out it was an alein so please get help and stay safe out there.”

Ok I was so scared I didn’t know what to do so I but the letter back into the bottle and put it back in the ocean hoping other will see it too. and I told bear I’m so sorry but we need to go get help. so that what we did we went straight back into the car and drove over to the station I ran right in it and told them everything and before you know it there were police helicopters everywhere and lots of police out. but then everything just went black hold on was that all a dream but then all of a sudden there were a whole group of aliens surrounding me and then everything just went blank…………………………………………………………………………………..THE END…………………………………………………………………………………………………….